Thursday, November 22, 2007

Ind. Piece.

I haven't had a chance to type up and post my in-class work, and I won't be home all weekend. Instead, I thought I'd post something I wrote outside of class.

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I feel like a victim in this dress
With tender, fragile tufts and frills
Leering men behind cigar smoke
Tap their ashes and look on.
I feel ashen,
And embarrassed under their gaze.
As I walk home late afternoon
I see a man huddled at the foot of a hill,
In an abandoned park
With only trees to converse with,
But he isn't up for talking, anyway.
Sunlight glints off something in his hand
And I notice he's crying.
The tears also shine in the sun.
I've almost passed the park when he lifts the something to his head;
A click
And a boom
And I no longer feel like a victim.

1 comment:

Lisa said...

wow. I'm reading through all the blogs and THIS jumped off the screen. very powerful; your restraint keeps the reader with you at every line, and the surprise at the end is truly a surprise. what is unspeakable is conveyed not through language per se, but through the sense of "sound." wow, I'm there. and it's powerful!
Lisa